As a means of keeping the candle burning, for those that are following the Why Write Series, I am printing a submission from last week’s 200 word assignment. Following the submission, Cindy and I worked on a correction – see the difference?
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The Beginning of Cindy – Submission
Why would I like to write ? Well let me think for a moment somewhere in this mind of mine there is a desire in me to tell the stories that are in the filing cabinet of my mind Can you just imagine what it would feel like to take those stories out of the mind and put them on paper and share them with other people .Maybe just maybe I will be able to share a moment in time that was so amazing it took me on a journey at least in my mind that was let say a little unusual .
The trouble is I am not sure how to begin ,also my grammar is not so good my spelling well lease said about that the better. I listen to myself and realise these are all excuses , I guess in modem day terms it’s called fear of being rejected . I mean why would anyone be interested in what I have to say ?
Though I ask myself out of this amazing life and all its trials and tribulations there has been some fantastic happenings, I began to think
“so Cindy” would I like to put it out there ? Why” Yes” the answer came back I think I would if I have someone like you Peter guiding and couching me along the way . So Peter let the games begin.
The Beginning of Cindy – Correction
Why would I like to write?
Well, let me think for a moment; somewhere in this mind of mine, there is a desire to tell the stories that are in the filing cabinet of my mind.
Imagine what it would feel like to take those stories out of the mind and put them on paper to share with other people?
Maybe, just maybe, I will be able to share a moment in time that was so amazing; it took me on a journey, which seemed in my mind, to be a little unusual.
I am not sure how to begin. You see, my grammar is not so good, and my spelling…well, the least said about that the better.
I listen to myself and realise these are all excuses; I guess, in modern terms, it’s called, fear of rejection. I mean, why would anyone be interested in what I have to say? So, I tell myself; out of my amazing life with all it’s trials and tribulations there have been some fantastic happenings.
I think to myself, ‘So Cindy, would you like to ‘put it out there?’
‘Why, yes,’ the answer came back, ‘Peter, with your coaching, let the games begin.’
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